My Final Draft

Today I wrote my final draft! I'm so glad to finally be done. I might take it to the learning center to a different person one more time. I have my title as my thesis and I think I find that there is some unity towards the end of the paper. It's supposed to be a descriptive essay that is 2 1/4 pages long that talks about a particular experience as one of my favorites living on a farm in the country. It was when Kim and Erin came over with their kids. I'm really hoping that it is good enough and that they'll really like it.